A Book Coach is a Light Switch: You Don’t Have to Write in the Dark!

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What is it like to work with a book coach on your project?

Let’s take a look at some feedback I received from a writer I worked with to get the real feel.

First, the whole process was very professional and thoughtful. Then there was the feedback. It was organized in a way that was helpful and not overwhelming. It was very specific which helped me get a sense for why something wasn’t working. I also appreciated the open ended questions and ways the feedback got me thinking.

I want to break this down:

  1. Working with a coach is a professional relationship. I take it seriously which means I take you and your project seriously. As a writer, I know how close these stories are to our hearts and so I will never take the responsibility of giving feedback to you lightly.
  2. I will be thorough, but my job is to always organize what I see into patterns for you. I think this makes it easier to learn and apply new skills across your manuscript, not just in one paragraph.
  3. I am the question asker. If I think something isn’t clear or that you can dig deeper, I’m going to push on that spot with lots of questions. Sure, I could say “more emotion here” and go about my day, but I think asking the writer questions will help you dive deeper to truly capture your story.
  4. I want to leave you thinking. And excited. And invigorated! When a writer gets to a place of inviting in feedback it’s often because we (and I include myself here because samesies) don’t know what’s not working anymore. We may even feel a little blah about our stories. When we are finished working together, I want you to feel armed and ready to attack another round of revision/planning/drafting with renewed energy and enthusiasm for your story.

The writer went on…

I really liked how my story had evolved but it didn’t feel “done.” After receiving feedback and meeting with you, I can see the story getting better. And while I have work to do, I don’t see it taking a long time. Again, the feedback was very specific, which makes all the difference.

Specific feedback and next steps. That’s what you get when you work with me. Whether it’s a manuscript evaluation, planning your next idea, or walking through a revision plan. The goal is for you to have the tools needed to elevate your story to the next level. I never want you leaving one of our calls thinking, “Well, now what?”

Sometimes, we just don’t know what we don’t know yet. I want to help you see your stories in a new way, walk you through any new skills you may need, and provide you with the confidence you need to do the hard work.

Because as a coach, I can’t do the hard work for you.

Sorry.

But you can.

I wasn’t sure how I’d answer the questions about [story specifics redacted] without dumping a bunch of information. But the minute you walked me through how to [story specifics redacted] a light bulb went off.

With me as your coach, I’ll be your light switch.

Don’t write in the dark any more.

Schedule a free consultation to discuss your story and how I can help you make your manuscript shine.

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Published by Monica Cox

Monica is a writer and book coach who helps communications professionals honor their creative dreams, apply their skills to fiction, and finish their novels.

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